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May 16, 2011
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:iconorinoor:
I love scenes like this, deceptively simple, beautiful details and light, with interesting shadows. The rock wall seems too much like a photograph, it needs more dimension/depth to the texture. Overall, fantastic concept, composition and lighting.
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:iconpontesrocs:
thank you very much for the constructive criticism and praise.
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:iconorinoor:
You are welcome. I didn't really feel qualified to give you a Critique, but I know I always like to see my work from another perspective. I do really love this image.
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:iconpontesrocs:
you 're welcome too.
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:iconbrunoben:
moi je dis que c'est joli , et même bien vu
les mousses dans le mur font un peu "aplat" , mais ça gène pas , par contre tu as survolé le vélo , et c'est dommage , pour le tuyau à droite par contre c'est waterloo
l'ombre de la lanterne : grandiose !
la perspective intimiste , c'est du grand pontesroc, qui est surtout un bon photographe !
donc je fav pour ne pas oublier que le jeune padawan devient un vrai djedi .

Amitiés



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:iconpontesrocs:
Merci mon poto,je te souhaite un heureux anniversaire.
Continue de scruter mon travail pour que petit djedi ne redevienne jeune padawan. Amicalement.
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:iconbrunoben:
merchi beaucoup.....
je veille :)
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:iconkaelay:
~kaelay May 18, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
nice, though id suggest using a different light, so your shadows get blurried the further they are from the source, right now they look very sharp
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:iconpontesrocs:
It is interesting but the desired effect will not be the same. Thank you anyway
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~thandav May 18, 2011  Professional General Artist
:tighthug::airborne::love:cool
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